July 23th, 2009
And here is the new, better organised version. I will be adding chapters as soon as they are finished (I hope they won’t take very long). I’m not deleting the old one, but I still like this new version better. I hope you do too. 
Ava Rice
April 7th, 2009
Hey, I made this a separate page because it’s not yet finished (not even close to be finished). I’m not yet sure if I should continue writing it at all since it’s too complex to be captured by a short story and I don’t have any useful experience with anyting else. Therefore it’s future is as yet, very very uncertain in many ways but I still hope you would be able to detect the chram that first attracted me to the story and made me reluctant to discard it and fight for it instead. Let’s just hope the bloody battle will give birth to something fully shaped and worth reading. In the mean time…
-Ava Rice-
